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Thoroughly Fogged
The Cloudfarers · Book 1 · 2026
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Rylan hopes a magical Skill will let him pay off the debt that has kept him serving the Thistlethorns since childhood. When acquiring one instead puts him at risk of being bound by a Spirit Contract, he escapes into the cloudsea. Other people follow him into the fog, and nobody knows the way out.
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What makes it funny?
The opening chapter gives floating sheep a practical drawback: you should avoid standing underneath them. Their shepherd’s stained, extra-wide hat supplies the explanation. Rylan also makes generous use of “fog” as a swear while trying to finish his chores.
The comedy at work
Rylan has sarcastic answers ready for the staff who keep handing him work, but usually has to swallow them. His private commentary lets him complain when his position requires obedience, especially as one last chore keeps turning into another.
Try this if…
The cloudsea’s everyday workings get close attention, from water condensers to livestock that drift through the mist. This suits readers who enjoy learning how an invented world functions and watching a character work hard to gain abilities.
Good to know
Rylan’s childhood debt and the threat to his freedom give the adventure serious stakes. The author flags graphic violence for the series.
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